Hello Esteves, how are you? I hope that very good!
First of all I must thank you for taking this course, I hope you have learned from it!
I must congratulate you for the excellent composition and development of elements I really like, the detail of the feathers and the hexahedra as coming out of the product are great, they give a very good interaction to the composition, however I leave you a couple of comments for you to evaluate how can this be:
1. Distribution of elements: The creation of your elements is great, however at the time of composition in my personal taste I feel that those who are closest to the camera steal the prominence of the composition I would like you to be able to focus attention A little more on the product, this can be done by playing with the sizes of the elements and bringing the product a little closer to the camera so that it does not feel so deep in the background, if you like you can try it and see how this result is.
2. Move the bottom away: The "endless" that you have in the background is a little close to the product, what if you move it away a bit so that this helps to generate this depth of which we speak.
I hope these comments can be of help to you and I would like to see that result very soon!
In advance I apologize for the delay in responding but these months have been a bit heavy in the studio, but I always try to take the space to calmly review each message and project! If you have any questions please let me know!
@alejandroherrada Thank you very much for your feedback! You are @alejandroherrada right with the elements in front and the endless bg, I'll do it in my next project !!
Sorry my bad Spanish hehe I'm Portuguese.
Diogo
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The feathers are very cool, I like the composition.
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@werlibero Gracias :)
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Profesor PlusHello Esteves, how are you? I hope that very good!
First of all I must thank you for taking this course, I hope you have learned from it!
I must congratulate you for the excellent composition and development of elements I really like, the detail of the feathers and the hexahedra as coming out of the product are great, they give a very good interaction to the composition, however I leave you a couple of comments for you to evaluate how can this be:
1. Distribution of elements: The creation of your elements is great, however at the time of composition in my personal taste I feel that those who are closest to the camera steal the prominence of the composition I would like you to be able to focus attention A little more on the product, this can be done by playing with the sizes of the elements and bringing the product a little closer to the camera so that it does not feel so deep in the background, if you like you can try it and see how this result is.
2. Move the bottom away: The "endless" that you have in the background is a little close to the product, what if you move it away a bit so that this helps to generate this depth of which we speak.
I hope these comments can be of help to you and I would like to see that result very soon!
In advance I apologize for the delay in responding but these months have been a bit heavy in the studio, but I always try to take the space to calmly review each message and project! If you have any questions please let me know!
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@alejandroherrada Thank you very much for your feedback! You are @alejandroherrada right with the elements in front and the endless bg, I'll do it in my next project !!
Sorry my bad Spanish hehe I'm Portuguese.
Diogo
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