@penha1986 Thanks for sharing your project! I think the parallel game between the Street Fighter game and the bathroom scene is very interesting. It is always good that you try to do this type of game, since it is a way of taking risks in storytelling and having to find different solutions. I miss the cover and second page required in the exercise. Perhaps you have lacked what is said "air" in some of the vignettes, that is, it can give the feeling that the elements are somewhat boxed in. Unless you did it on purpose to create a claustrophobic feeling. I think it would have been good for you to expand the narration to a second page, thus playing with some larger shots.
Nice job! I wish you good luck in your future projects
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Profesor Plus@penha1986 Thanks for sharing your project! I think the parallel game between the Street Fighter game and the bathroom scene is very interesting. It is always good that you try to do this type of game, since it is a way of taking risks in storytelling and having to find different solutions. I miss the cover and second page required in the exercise. Perhaps you have lacked what is said "air" in some of the vignettes, that is, it can give the feeling that the elements are somewhat boxed in. Unless you did it on purpose to create a claustrophobic feeling. I think it would have been good for you to expand the narration to a second page, thus playing with some larger shots.
Nice job! I wish you good luck in your future projects
A hug,
Ana
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