I like the design in general! Nice colors, and I liked how you used the semi-circles to indicate a trajectory.
Some comments: maybe the change in size between the word on the left and the text on the right is in the middle that is not quite clear. I would tell you to either keep the same size, or make a more radical change in size so that visually you can easily notice the difference you wanted to make. Then the pagination on the left with the numbers ends up being redundant since you have the same pagination at the top right. I would choose one of the two. The numbers of the pagination on the left (if you keep it) are very "crowded, I would look for a smaller size or I would enlarge the circles so that they have more white space and breathe better. And finally, the logo at the bottom right It is very far-fetched to find it. I would recommend that you look for a position where it is the first thing to be read, because the whole site revolves around the brand, and the visual element that represents the brand is the logo. That is why it is usually placed at the top on the left, to make it the first thing you read.
Hug and keep telling him that you are on the right track!
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displayname547753
Profesor PlusHi jimmy!
I like the design in general! Nice colors, and I liked how you used the semi-circles to indicate a trajectory.
Some comments: maybe the change in size between the word on the left and the text on the right is in the middle that is not quite clear. I would tell you to either keep the same size, or make a more radical change in size so that visually you can easily notice the difference you wanted to make. Then the pagination on the left with the numbers ends up being redundant since you have the same pagination at the top right. I would choose one of the two. The numbers of the pagination on the left (if you keep it) are very "crowded, I would look for a smaller size or I would enlarge the circles so that they have more white space and breathe better. And finally, the logo at the bottom right It is very far-fetched to find it. I would recommend that you look for a position where it is the first thing to be read, because the whole site revolves around the brand, and the visual element that represents the brand is the logo. That is why it is usually placed at the top on the left, to make it the first thing you read.
Hug and keep telling him that you are on the right track!
displayname166313
PlusThank you very kind Adrian, I appreciate your feedback, thanks for the comments I will make the changes and share it again.
Greetings a hug
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