very good @ere_barcenas !
and excuse the absence, I was outside of Spain (close to you, in Central America) and very busy ...
to the topic
... well resolved the measurement of the light in the church (watch in the second image, the white burns a little, with spot measurement it may be better ;-)
... good use of the telephoto lens at a medium high speed in detail photographs (frozen, fresh, plant with the lake in the background)
... about the landscapes ... mmm ... if we wait for a better time, a little earlier or when it gets dark, the light will be kinder and the image won't be so 'matte', so 'grayish' ... I don't know
... altogether you narrate the place very well (I missed it on my trip to Mexico !!!), from the main icon to the specific details, well summarized in church + lake + nature + crafts
... good closing with the images of flowers ... the same, on another occasion, intersperse the images along the way ... perhaps the edition has another rhythm (church, flower, church, lake, church, flower. ..) or reduce the number of images, it will increase the impact!
... the composition of the last three images, that of your hand, the orange flower and Adam's rib ... they work perfectly! you handle composition based on central elements well ... keep it around ... or change it for a change if (as it happens to me sometimes) you get bored with your traditional schemes ...
thanks for sharing that corner of Mexico, hugs from Barcelona !!!
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Nice colors !!
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Thank you very much @javialaba :)
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Profesor Plusvery good @ere_barcenas !
and excuse the absence, I was outside of Spain (close to you, in Central America) and very busy ...
to the topic
... well resolved the measurement of the light in the church (watch in the second image, the white burns a little, with spot measurement it may be better ;-)
... good use of the telephoto lens at a medium high speed in detail photographs (frozen, fresh, plant with the lake in the background)
... about the landscapes ... mmm ... if we wait for a better time, a little earlier or when it gets dark, the light will be kinder and the image won't be so 'matte', so 'grayish' ... I don't know
... altogether you narrate the place very well (I missed it on my trip to Mexico !!!), from the main icon to the specific details, well summarized in church + lake + nature + crafts
... good closing with the images of flowers ... the same, on another occasion, intersperse the images along the way ... perhaps the edition has another rhythm (church, flower, church, lake, church, flower. ..) or reduce the number of images, it will increase the impact!
... the composition of the last three images, that of your hand, the orange flower and Adam's rib ... they work perfectly! you handle composition based on central elements well ... keep it around ... or change it for a change if (as it happens to me sometimes) you get bored with your traditional schemes ...
thanks for sharing that corner of Mexico, hugs from Barcelona !!!
Jesus
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Hi @jesus_g_pastor :) I hadn't seen your comment and it's been 7 months! What a shame: B
Thank you very much for your feedback and suggestions, of course they will help me to continue learning and improving.
Greetings and I hope you return to Mexico so that you know more about our picturesque corners: D
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