What most caught my attention were those reds on the ground with the greens on the leaves. Nice color combination @makoki9 ! On the other hand, you have applied the lighting technique correctly, without strange cuts or jumps, good for you!
Looking closely at the image, I see that the girl is carrying a flashlight, right? It would have been good to give it more importance in terms of light, that is, to highlight (or distort) the beam of the flashlight itself. Technically the photo does not hobble me anywhere, but it does invite me to "give it a couple of turns"
When I look at it I like the textures of the ground and the leaves, but it is also true that the whites that appear on the left side distract me a bit, in the same way that on the right side there is an illuminated area of the ground that may be could tone down a bit.
If I combine this feeling with giving more importance to the flashlight it occurs to me to propose to take the same photo but at night (or at least with much less ambient light)
As there is not a great movement in the model, it is possible to try to shoot the photo at a much darker time of day and counteract the lack of light with a fairly slow exposure. Shoot (for example) at 1 or 2 seconds exposure and rear-curtain synchro flash. In this way you would gain a lot of plastic with the flashlight and the light that it would make, you would avoid having burnt targets in the background and you could play to fill in each area depending on the exposure time of each shot.
It could be 1 second of exposure for model illuminated with flashlight + several shots with slower exposures to recover environment, maintaining parameters and focus, and even without model. Then you make the collage in PS and that's it.
I tell you, all this is still a suggestion based on my idea of "enhancing the flashlight." The photo is technically well resolved and there is nothing in it to derail the view; so it will depend on whether or not you dare to try the night version. Be that as it may, congratulations on applying the lighting technique gracefully!
Thank you!
In fact, we met at sunset with the intention of doing different tests (not at night, but with less light) ... But unfortunately it started to rain (a lot), and we had to speed up the session.
Anyway, I will continue practicing without any doubt.
Thank you very much for the course.
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Profesor PlusWhat most caught my attention were those reds on the ground with the greens on the leaves. Nice color combination @makoki9 ! On the other hand, you have applied the lighting technique correctly, without strange cuts or jumps, good for you!
Looking closely at the image, I see that the girl is carrying a flashlight, right? It would have been good to give it more importance in terms of light, that is, to highlight (or distort) the beam of the flashlight itself. Technically the photo does not hobble me anywhere, but it does invite me to "give it a couple of turns"
When I look at it I like the textures of the ground and the leaves, but it is also true that the whites that appear on the left side distract me a bit, in the same way that on the right side there is an illuminated area of the ground that may be could tone down a bit.
If I combine this feeling with giving more importance to the flashlight it occurs to me to propose to take the same photo but at night (or at least with much less ambient light)
As there is not a great movement in the model, it is possible to try to shoot the photo at a much darker time of day and counteract the lack of light with a fairly slow exposure. Shoot (for example) at 1 or 2 seconds exposure and rear-curtain synchro flash. In this way you would gain a lot of plastic with the flashlight and the light that it would make, you would avoid having burnt targets in the background and you could play to fill in each area depending on the exposure time of each shot.
It could be 1 second of exposure for model illuminated with flashlight + several shots with slower exposures to recover environment, maintaining parameters and focus, and even without model. Then you make the collage in PS and that's it.
I tell you, all this is still a suggestion based on my idea of "enhancing the flashlight." The photo is technically well resolved and there is nothing in it to derail the view; so it will depend on whether or not you dare to try the night version. Be that as it may, congratulations on applying the lighting technique gracefully!
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Thank you!
In fact, we met at sunset with the intention of doing different tests (not at night, but with less light) ... But unfortunately it started to rain (a lot), and we had to speed up the session.
Anyway, I will continue practicing without any doubt.
Thank you very much for the course.
(One that follows you from La Pegatina)
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