Very good! I love the expression of the eyes, the hand ...
The only thing that squeaks me a bit is the type, I know it's the one from the movie but it strikes me as stuck and like it takes away from the character, but it's just my opinion. Have you tried leaving the text behind, with your head covering the bit of the N? Or take away a bit of presence by adding some texture just to the text. Actually, the text would not be necessary because the character has a lot of strength and is well known, so I think that if a text is inserted it has to be "at the service of the character" and if possible, contribute something else that is not already seen in the original posters. Look at the one with the illustrator Flore Maquín and you will see what I mean.
In any case, I'm telling you that it's just my opinion, but it's great.
PS: I'd also like to see it without the hand line or softening it a bit. (What a mess, don't pay too much attention to me either :)
Of course I listen to you, and I value your advice a lot, in fact I totally agree with them! I will try to improve the details that you advise me and I am sure it will be much better. Thank you for your honest feedback! :)
Thanks Dani! I was excited to receive your comment: D. It is the first time that I do something similar (use a pencil drawing of mine, scan it and then color it by photoshop), and I must tell you that I have learned as much as I have enjoyed it, which has been a lot! Go ahead and publish another course ^^
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displayname237559
Very good! I love the expression of the eyes, the hand ...
The only thing that squeaks me a bit is the type, I know it's the one from the movie but it strikes me as stuck and like it takes away from the character, but it's just my opinion. Have you tried leaving the text behind, with your head covering the bit of the N? Or take away a bit of presence by adding some texture just to the text. Actually, the text would not be necessary because the character has a lot of strength and is well known, so I think that if a text is inserted it has to be "at the service of the character" and if possible, contribute something else that is not already seen in the original posters. Look at the one with the illustrator Flore Maquín and you will see what I mean.
In any case, I'm telling you that it's just my opinion, but it's great.
PS: I'd also like to see it without the hand line or softening it a bit. (What a mess, don't pay too much attention to me either :)
displayname270290
Of course I listen to you, and I value your advice a lot, in fact I totally agree with them! I will try to improve the details that you advise me and I am sure it will be much better. Thank you for your honest feedback! :)
displayname52823
Profesor PlusGreat project @negroconrojo24 !!
I would have liked to see the process, even here, in the published project. You have caught the technique perfectly !!
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Thanks Dani! I was excited to receive your comment: D. It is the first time that I do something similar (use a pencil drawing of mine, scan it and then color it by photoshop), and I must tell you that I have learned as much as I have enjoyed it, which has been a lot! Go ahead and publish another course ^^
displayname218128
Profesor PlusIncredible the lines of the fingers and the texture under the eyes. Ah! and very cool the reflection of the hair. Great result!
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Thank you very much effcy! :)
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