Thank you very much, @marianaeguaras , an honor for your words and I am very glad that you have loved the images.
Greetings and have an excellent day or night or afternoon that I do not know what time you are :).
Brutal, I don't know if you needed this course !!!
Part by part. The first and the last image ... they cannot work better as the beginning and end of the story, especially the first. Points (small details) to 'improve' (I know that working in the street these details are complicated, eh! But it is about polishing and polishing and polishing). Watch with streetlights-traffic lights sticks that stick in people's heads (photo 3 and penultimate photo).
Delete photos, any. It will be even more forceful. For example, choose one between 9 and 10, they are very similar (9 works best). The 11, which is similar to the 12 (and there are many fellow photographers on stage ;-). And between 1 and 8, which are all banners, delete 2, let's see how (don't delete 1 or 3, eh! They are very good! Look at the strength of portraits looking at the camera on so many occasions. ..). And number 13 ... the color photo, isolated, works very well with the bloodstain, the metaphor. But in the set to me (it is a personal aesthetic criterion) it does not fit me with the set in black and white. Be careful with the focus in the 3rd photo because of the tail, the lady's retrto, very good ... but a hair out of focus.
Anyway ... minimal details aside, congratulations. Let's see if one day I stop by there again and have the opportunity to experience some historical moment of your wonderful country, hopefully some joyful celebration, yes ...
Hugs.
Months later I reply, @jesus_g_pastor an apology. Thank you very much for your comments as well as the advice that when I read them I realized the errors; If it is difficult to take pictures in the street but in the march I felt it a more difficult since it is a lot of movement of people and I can see a great frame but at the time of taking the photo everything has moved. I struggled a lot with the lighting and its settings in the camera, I ended up solving the problem by going to manual on the lens focus so I could have better control with the light. I already deleted some photos to make the story more compact, I hope it has improved.
I take this opportunity to thank you for your words and congratulations that are important to me since they motivate me to continue along this path that I have been passionate about since I was a child, photography.
A warm hug from Mexico and here is your home when you decide to come and experience magical moments that this country gives us every so often.
@jesus_g_pastor
Incredible report @fotosmentales !
I wanted to ask you both a question: What kind of post-production treatment with black have you given it? What is a filter? contrast? or what?
Sorry, but my limited knowledge does not allow me to better formulate the question :)
Thanks
Hello, @maria_pisto , thank you very much for your comment and regarding the treatment in BW, I'm honest, I remember little how I did it but it seems to me that I activated a BW profile in Lightroom and then made the contrast, lighting, WB adjustments and yes I don't remember badly, I made the first adjustments mentioned by color, especially with red, orange and yellow.
I apologize if I don't remember it very well, but it's been about 2 years since I developed the photos.
I send greetings and thanks to you!
Beautiful photos, cruel reality. Neither forgive nor forget from Colombia. I wanted to learn to take photographs and with your work, I am convinced, I hope that we can make an exhibition together, with the barbarities that we have had to live in our countries. A hug mate from Colombia.
If you are interested, write me on the facebook page "Revista la Anticosa" or from IG Anti.cosa
Comment on the air: Cosmic!!! I gave him a "like" and I was "liked" Number 43
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displayname41619
Great pictures Carlos! They have enchanted me.
displayname98353
Thank you very much, @marianaeguaras , an honor for your words and I am very glad that you have loved the images.
Greetings and have an excellent day or night or afternoon that I do not know what time you are :).
displayname122880
Profesor PlusBrutal, I don't know if you needed this course !!!
Part by part. The first and the last image ... they cannot work better as the beginning and end of the story, especially the first. Points (small details) to 'improve' (I know that working in the street these details are complicated, eh! But it is about polishing and polishing and polishing). Watch with streetlights-traffic lights sticks that stick in people's heads (photo 3 and penultimate photo).
Delete photos, any. It will be even more forceful. For example, choose one between 9 and 10, they are very similar (9 works best). The 11, which is similar to the 12 (and there are many fellow photographers on stage ;-). And between 1 and 8, which are all banners, delete 2, let's see how (don't delete 1 or 3, eh! They are very good! Look at the strength of portraits looking at the camera on so many occasions. ..). And number 13 ... the color photo, isolated, works very well with the bloodstain, the metaphor. But in the set to me (it is a personal aesthetic criterion) it does not fit me with the set in black and white. Be careful with the focus in the 3rd photo because of the tail, the lady's retrto, very good ... but a hair out of focus.
Anyway ... minimal details aside, congratulations. Let's see if one day I stop by there again and have the opportunity to experience some historical moment of your wonderful country, hopefully some joyful celebration, yes ...
Hugs.
displayname98353
Months later I reply, @jesus_g_pastor an apology. Thank you very much for your comments as well as the advice that when I read them I realized the errors; If it is difficult to take pictures in the street but in the march I felt it a more difficult since it is a lot of movement of people and I can see a great frame but at the time of taking the photo everything has moved. I struggled a lot with the lighting and its settings in the camera, I ended up solving the problem by going to manual on the lens focus so I could have better control with the light. I already deleted some photos to make the story more compact, I hope it has improved.
I take this opportunity to thank you for your words and congratulations that are important to me since they motivate me to continue along this path that I have been passionate about since I was a child, photography.
A warm hug from Mexico and here is your home when you decide to come and experience magical moments that this country gives us every so often.
displayname520241
@jesus_g_pastor
Incredible report @fotosmentales !
I wanted to ask you both a question: What kind of post-production treatment with black have you given it? What is a filter? contrast? or what?
Sorry, but my limited knowledge does not allow me to better formulate the question :)
Thanks
displayname98353
Hello, @maria_pisto , thank you very much for your comment and regarding the treatment in BW, I'm honest, I remember little how I did it but it seems to me that I activated a BW profile in Lightroom and then made the contrast, lighting, WB adjustments and yes I don't remember badly, I made the first adjustments mentioned by color, especially with red, orange and yellow.
I apologize if I don't remember it very well, but it's been about 2 years since I developed the photos.
I send greetings and thanks to you!
displayname451802
Shocking !!!!. Really, very moving.
displayname10558948
Beautiful photos, cruel reality. Neither forgive nor forget from Colombia. I wanted to learn to take photographs and with your work, I am convinced, I hope that we can make an exhibition together, with the barbarities that we have had to live in our countries. A hug mate from Colombia.
If you are interested, write me on the facebook page "Revista la Anticosa" or from IG Anti.cosa
Comment on the air: Cosmic!!! I gave him a "like" and I was "liked" Number 43
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