I really like the composition you used. This is better than in other exercises, but don't forget to pay special attention to getting a good overhead to avoid deforming the product. I celebrate the choice of showing the purses creating looks since it adds value to potential customers. I also think that you have captured very well how to make compositions that work ;) Perhaps as an improvement I would pay attention to two aspects: lighting and props. Regarding lighting, always remember to turn off the lights at home and repeat the lateral natural light scheme that we saw in the course and that you also have in the additional materials. Be very careful with bright elements because they are more difficult to control to find the right exposure. If you look at the first photo, there is a totally burned coin and that information is irrecoverable in the edition.
As for the elements you use, the cup, the comb or the bills arranged in tubes take me out of history a bit. Always try to polish the casting and keep only the best ("Less is more") and arrange them in the image in the most flattering way possible.
In general, the project is very good. I hope I have helped you to give your work another spin ;)
A hug.
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Profesor PlusHello Esther!
I really like the composition you used. This is better than in other exercises, but don't forget to pay special attention to getting a good overhead to avoid deforming the product. I celebrate the choice of showing the purses creating looks since it adds value to potential customers. I also think that you have captured very well how to make compositions that work ;) Perhaps as an improvement I would pay attention to two aspects: lighting and props. Regarding lighting, always remember to turn off the lights at home and repeat the lateral natural light scheme that we saw in the course and that you also have in the additional materials. Be very careful with bright elements because they are more difficult to control to find the right exposure. If you look at the first photo, there is a totally burned coin and that information is irrecoverable in the edition.
As for the elements you use, the cup, the comb or the bills arranged in tubes take me out of history a bit. Always try to polish the casting and keep only the best ("Less is more") and arrange them in the image in the most flattering way possible.
In general, the project is very good. I hope I have helped you to give your work another spin ;)
A hug.
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