Hi @lisa .cocomazzi!
Thank you for submitting your project.
I think the project does what it proposes to do well: to describe a day walking around the city of Firenze.
From the photos, we can see what the architecture is like, a little of the people who walk through the streets and feel a little of the city's atmosphere.
The photos in general are well composed, but I think there are some that stand out, in which the personality of the photographer is a little more evident. For example, I really like photo 6, with this movement and composition with strong colors. She stands out a lot from the set. Now, photo 10, of the clown smoking, is a masterpiece! It is for moments like these that we do street photography. It reminded me a lot of an Edward Hopper painting, Soir Bleu: https://br.pinterest.com/pin/526780487670445463/
The posture, the melancholy expression, the light and colors, and the way he is separate from other people. Sensational!
I also really like the boy running, in photo 5.
The others are good photos, but I think they're a little impersonal. In them, the architecture of the city predominates, and I can't feel much about the photographer, you know? There's nothing wrong with taking generic photos like that, but I think the way to find your style is more in photos like 5, 10 and 6.
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Profesor PlusHi @lisa .cocomazzi!
Thank you for submitting your project.
I think the project does what it proposes to do well: to describe a day walking around the city of Firenze.
From the photos, we can see what the architecture is like, a little of the people who walk through the streets and feel a little of the city's atmosphere.
The photos in general are well composed, but I think there are some that stand out, in which the personality of the photographer is a little more evident. For example, I really like photo 6, with this movement and composition with strong colors. She stands out a lot from the set. Now, photo 10, of the clown smoking, is a masterpiece! It is for moments like these that we do street photography. It reminded me a lot of an Edward Hopper painting, Soir Bleu: https://br.pinterest.com/pin/526780487670445463/
The posture, the melancholy expression, the light and colors, and the way he is separate from other people. Sensational!
I also really like the boy running, in photo 5.
The others are good photos, but I think they're a little impersonal. In them, the architecture of the city predominates, and I can't feel much about the photographer, you know? There's nothing wrong with taking generic photos like that, but I think the way to find your style is more in photos like 5, 10 and 6.
Good job!
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@gustavominas thank you so much for your time. I will treasure the comments and advice you gave me!
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