@dcmv87 Hola Barbara, Thanks for sharing your writing with us. I like the way you weave the different exercises into a story. It was interesting also to see the drawings that you did on one of your other courses – I was thinking that this story is very much about the body, and how we experience the world through the different parts of the body: the kneels, the ankles, the eyes, the hands for painting. One suggestion I have would be to include drawings with the text. It could be interesting to present them together. Or maybe to have sub-headings as you tell the story, starting from the eyes. Thanks again for your participation in the course. I appreciate it. Un saludo desde Madrid!
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Profesor Plus@dcmv87 Hola Barbara, Thanks for sharing your writing with us. I like the way you weave the different exercises into a story. It was interesting also to see the drawings that you did on one of your other courses – I was thinking that this story is very much about the body, and how we experience the world through the different parts of the body: the kneels, the ankles, the eyes, the hands for painting. One suggestion I have would be to include drawings with the text. It could be interesting to present them together. Or maybe to have sub-headings as you tell the story, starting from the eyes. Thanks again for your participation in the course. I appreciate it. Un saludo desde Madrid!
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