I really liked your text, I think you catch the attention. Perhaps it would be interesting if you removed information that is not strictly necessary. I also recommend that you check the verb tense again so that everything agrees. Also look at the grammar. A hug.
@mariafernandamp Thank you very much for your comments and for taking the time to review it.
I loved the course, it was very precise, thank you for sharing your knowledge with us.
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Profesor PlusI really liked your text, I think you catch the attention. Perhaps it would be interesting if you removed information that is not strictly necessary. I also recommend that you check the verb tense again so that everything agrees. Also look at the grammar. A hug.
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@mariafernandamp Thank you very much for your comments and for taking the time to review it.
I loved the course, it was very precise, thank you for sharing your knowledge with us.
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