Hi Catia, how are you? I really liked your version, it was very strong visually and the elements are very iconic. It was a great choice to make this Red mark on the big character and use yellow as a contrast in the background. I would just define the wolf a little more, because looking at it at first I had a little trouble recognizing his profile there. I think because the ears get a little confused with the open mouth, I imagine that putting some sharp teeth in the mouth will make the direction of his head clearer.
On the question of style, think that the technique can (and should) adapt to what you already do (although it is always good to try other ways, even if you are not satisfied with the result, it is always valid). You might consider mixing some stamp textures into your characters' clothing, even if it's more realistic, or doing some pencil strokes to create textures. I'll leave the work of Bernardo França as an example here:
https://www.behance.net/gallery/121721707/ILLUSTRATION-KEY-TO-HAPPINESS/modules/692429533
Take a look at this illustration, as he uses the stroke to create texture in his hair, the shadow on his elbows and pants. I would love for you to come back here and tell me what you think about everything I told you. Congratulations on your project and for venturing into a field you're not very used to, it's a real challenge!
Thanks for the feedback Ana. I've added more details and I think the wolf is now more recognizable. I loved Bernardo França's work, I'll follow along to get inspired.
I also included in the project a test applied to a series of my comic strips that are stopped at the moment and I want to give it a new look.
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Profesor PlusHi Catia, how are you? I really liked your version, it was very strong visually and the elements are very iconic. It was a great choice to make this Red mark on the big character and use yellow as a contrast in the background. I would just define the wolf a little more, because looking at it at first I had a little trouble recognizing his profile there. I think because the ears get a little confused with the open mouth, I imagine that putting some sharp teeth in the mouth will make the direction of his head clearer.
On the question of style, think that the technique can (and should) adapt to what you already do (although it is always good to try other ways, even if you are not satisfied with the result, it is always valid). You might consider mixing some stamp textures into your characters' clothing, even if it's more realistic, or doing some pencil strokes to create textures. I'll leave the work of Bernardo França as an example here:
https://www.behance.net/gallery/121721707/ILLUSTRATION-KEY-TO-HAPPINESS/modules/692429533
Take a look at this illustration, as he uses the stroke to create texture in his hair, the shadow on his elbows and pants. I would love for you to come back here and tell me what you think about everything I told you. Congratulations on your project and for venturing into a field you're not very used to, it's a real challenge!
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PlusThanks for the feedback Ana. I've added more details and I think the wolf is now more recognizable. I loved Bernardo França's work, I'll follow along to get inspired.
I also included in the project a test applied to a series of my comic strips that are stopped at the moment and I want to give it a new look.
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