Sorry for the delay in reviewing your project.
I think it's a super good idea and a very interesting topic. Did you think about working on other sections?
As for composition, it is a bit linear, it is not that it is bad but you can make it more dynamic by having hierarchies (title, subtitle, descriptive texts) and making your characters bigger. You could even describe parts of them by going into more detail.
A couple of extra tips, if this is a double page, the line that divides your illustration in half is a fold, and any elements found there will be lost when the book is folded. The same happens with elements that are very close to the edge of the page, they need a little air and thus also avoid being cut off.
The stickers look amazing! Do you plan to do all the characters?
Greetings and thanks for participating in the course!
@brunice thank you very much, the feedback is very valuable! I am planning to study color theory a little more in depth, and right now I am going to study composition theory in more detail as well!
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Profesor PlusHello @lava_gargoteja !
Sorry for the delay in reviewing your project.
I think it's a super good idea and a very interesting topic. Did you think about working on other sections?
As for composition, it is a bit linear, it is not that it is bad but you can make it more dynamic by having hierarchies (title, subtitle, descriptive texts) and making your characters bigger. You could even describe parts of them by going into more detail.
A couple of extra tips, if this is a double page, the line that divides your illustration in half is a fold, and any elements found there will be lost when the book is folded. The same happens with elements that are very close to the edge of the page, they need a little air and thus also avoid being cut off.
The stickers look amazing! Do you plan to do all the characters?
Greetings and thanks for participating in the course!
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@brunice thank you very much, the feedback is very valuable! I am planning to study color theory a little more in depth, and right now I am going to study composition theory in more detail as well!
Thanks for the great course! : D
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