This is a good strong concept, William, and overall it's well executed. There's a touch of Pac-man about it, which everyone recognises and which makes the idea clear and immediate.
I have one minor comment to make. I think aesthetically it would look better without the black frame around the illustration. If you extended the background to the edges, and faded to black - or a darker green - at the top, that might look better.
Well done!
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Profesor PlusThis is a good strong concept, William, and overall it's well executed. There's a touch of Pac-man about it, which everyone recognises and which makes the idea clear and immediate.
I have one minor comment to make. I think aesthetically it would look better without the black frame around the illustration. If you extended the background to the edges, and faded to black - or a darker green - at the top, that might look better.
Well done!
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PlusThank you very much for your comment, I really liked your course. Thanks.
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