Hi @debbiemc
Thank you very much for participating in this course, I hope that what you have learned will be helpful for your future illustrated projects. I had not had the opportunity to see your project before but I find it interesting the way you propose the alteration of time and space by showing the children drawing at the end, which in the same way is a key to interpreting the story. The die as a black hole is fun, be careful that it works both when you open it and when you close it for both sides of the page. The elements of sequentiality are also solved very well in the end.
I'm not quite sure if the last page is a double page or a page. Take that detail into account.
Very well! I congratulate you and thank you again
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Thank you very much for participating in this course, I hope that what you have learned will be helpful for your future illustrated projects. I had not had the opportunity to see your project before but I find it interesting the way you propose the alteration of time and space by showing the children drawing at the end, which in the same way is a key to interpreting the story. The die as a black hole is fun, be careful that it works both when you open it and when you close it for both sides of the page. The elements of sequentiality are also solved very well in the end.
I'm not quite sure if the last page is a double page or a page. Take that detail into account.
Very well! I congratulate you and thank you again
Cheers
Paula Bossio
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Thanks so much for your feedback and for this wonderful course. The content, instruction, and exercises were superb, challenging, and meaningful.
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