Hello Norberto, how are you? Very good your project! I hope you have enjoyed the course.
Things that I could give you as feedback, although they sound a bit obvious perhaps, are:
1- The first render you show should be the best of all. It's the one that makes the viewer say "wow!" and keep scrolling down. Therefore, I would not put the render of the different maps first, but rather that of the sphere, or the last. The final result is usually shown first, and then the process.
2- In the render where the different sets of textures are, the first one on the left (green) draws a lot of attention and breaks the range of colors compared to its peers. The attention goes there as soon as you see the image. And maybe it's not what you want to happen. The first one on the right is the one that best looks, but the attention is taken by the green one.
Sorry for extending and I hope you understand haha ..
I send you a hug Norberto!
@fernandesangelj Good! Great, yes yes, grateful for everything and needed that feedback.
Mainly why I added it was for a post-apocalyptic intention and to show another variety. I understand that it may be better to maintain certain similar criteria within them, great!
Thank you very much again, I feel like it should be the first thing to study when starting out as an Enviroment Artist.
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Teacher PlusHello Norberto, how are you? Very good your project! I hope you have enjoyed the course.
Things that I could give you as feedback, although they sound a bit obvious perhaps, are:
1- The first render you show should be the best of all. It's the one that makes the viewer say "wow!" and keep scrolling down. Therefore, I would not put the render of the different maps first, but rather that of the sphere, or the last. The final result is usually shown first, and then the process.
2- In the render where the different sets of textures are, the first one on the left (green) draws a lot of attention and breaks the range of colors compared to its peers. The attention goes there as soon as you see the image. And maybe it's not what you want to happen. The first one on the right is the one that best looks, but the attention is taken by the green one.
Sorry for extending and I hope you understand haha ..
I send you a hug Norberto!
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@fernandesangelj Good! Great, yes yes, grateful for everything and needed that feedback.
Mainly why I added it was for a post-apocalyptic intention and to show another variety. I understand that it may be better to maintain certain similar criteria within them, great!
Thank you very much again, I feel like it should be the first thing to study when starting out as an Enviroment Artist.
Cheers!
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