Thanks for uploading your project! I think this photograph is a good starting point, but not an ending point. Thinking about your references, Platon, Vivan Maier, Annie Leibovitz ... they are works that have tension in common. How could you add tension? It occurs to me to accentuate the contrast between light and shadow, explore other positions, open the plane more, perhaps center the model so that her hair frames the face with symmetry ... these are options that occur to me at this moment but surely you, camera in hand, you can think of others.
Do you want to continue working on this project and then discuss it together?
@lupedelavallina Thank you for your words ...
I agree with you ... I think the photo itself is not strong enough to stand out ... However, I have another one from another session that might as well have that strength ... I'll pass it on to you and we'll see ... Thanks for I think the course is very instructive and has helped me a lot.
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Teacher PlusHi Alex:
Thanks for uploading your project! I think this photograph is a good starting point, but not an ending point. Thinking about your references, Platon, Vivan Maier, Annie Leibovitz ... they are works that have tension in common. How could you add tension? It occurs to me to accentuate the contrast between light and shadow, explore other positions, open the plane more, perhaps center the model so that her hair frames the face with symmetry ... these are options that occur to me at this moment but surely you, camera in hand, you can think of others.
Do you want to continue working on this project and then discuss it together?
A hug,
Lupe
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Plus@lupedelavallina Thank you for your words ...
I agree with you ... I think the photo itself is not strong enough to stand out ... However, I have another one from another session that might as well have that strength ... I'll pass it on to you and we'll see ... Thanks for I think the course is very instructive and has helped me a lot.
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