I like the general look of the collage, the color palette is good as well as the choice of images.
But there are things that I identify as big mistakes:
1- The images are not well cropped, the flower can be seen strange edges and pieces of the background.
2- The squares above and below I think they are unnecessary and do not contribute anything.
3- Misuse of calligraphic typography with open interlining that goes against the purpose for which it was designed.
These are details that will be refined over time, for now I would try to remake this collage taking these details into account.
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I like the general look of the collage, the color palette is good as well as the choice of images.
But there are things that I identify as big mistakes:
1- The images are not well cropped, the flower can be seen strange edges and pieces of the background.
2- The squares above and below I think they are unnecessary and do not contribute anything.
3- Misuse of calligraphic typography with open interlining that goes against the purpose for which it was designed.
These are details that will be refined over time, for now I would try to remake this collage taking these details into account.
Greetings.
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