Thanks for posting your project! I like the variety in the photos and in the moments, and it shows that the subject you have chosen is interesting and has personality, good job.
The photos of the interview are expressive, I really like the detail of the hands on the lap. The photos of the pose have a lot of potential and I think that with a little more planning (during the shoot or in post production) they would have gained a lot. For example, it is very interesting how you align the "beef head" with the subject and with the chair, but if I'm not mistaken, the vertical axis of the photo is somewhat twisted and loses power. The same happens with the rest of the wall decoration, if you remove the drawing and the wicker object, I think, that hang on the wall, the photo gains much more! The photos in which the model appears with feathers are like unbalanced in the composition, she does not have enough prominence, and as a photographer I can imagine that you had a good idea but you executed it with some haste or agitation, is it possible?
I would like to receive your answer! All these recommendations are not critical, but possible steps that can improve your photos even more, because they are seen to be ambitious.
Thank you for taking the time to review my photos and recommend these changes. As you point out, the end of the shoot was hasty, the girl's baby started crying and we had little time, so I shot some photos pretty quickly.
I retouched the photo of the beef head, it is now less crooked and removed the wall decoration. I think something better works. As for the photos of the feathers ... we directly discarded them, they are all unbalanced, we wanted to use the cat, but when there are animals you have to adapt to them, it seemed like a good idea a priori, all very wild, with the feathers and that cat with those eyes ... but it is true that it was improvised and perhaps not well executed.
In any case, it has been very good to listen to your advice and take your course at Domestika. I will try to do more sessions with models to continue improving the portraits, practicing everything I have learned. Do you do face-to-face workshops or master classes?
I follow you in networks. I hear you. I learn. Thanks again for sharing knowledge!
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Teacher PlusHello Rocio:
Thanks for posting your project! I like the variety in the photos and in the moments, and it shows that the subject you have chosen is interesting and has personality, good job.
The photos of the interview are expressive, I really like the detail of the hands on the lap. The photos of the pose have a lot of potential and I think that with a little more planning (during the shoot or in post production) they would have gained a lot. For example, it is very interesting how you align the "beef head" with the subject and with the chair, but if I'm not mistaken, the vertical axis of the photo is somewhat twisted and loses power. The same happens with the rest of the wall decoration, if you remove the drawing and the wicker object, I think, that hang on the wall, the photo gains much more! The photos in which the model appears with feathers are like unbalanced in the composition, she does not have enough prominence, and as a photographer I can imagine that you had a good idea but you executed it with some haste or agitation, is it possible?
I would like to receive your answer! All these recommendations are not critical, but possible steps that can improve your photos even more, because they are seen to be ambitious.
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Hi Lupe:
Thank you for taking the time to review my photos and recommend these changes. As you point out, the end of the shoot was hasty, the girl's baby started crying and we had little time, so I shot some photos pretty quickly.
I retouched the photo of the beef head, it is now less crooked and removed the wall decoration. I think something better works. As for the photos of the feathers ... we directly discarded them, they are all unbalanced, we wanted to use the cat, but when there are animals you have to adapt to them, it seemed like a good idea a priori, all very wild, with the feathers and that cat with those eyes ... but it is true that it was improvised and perhaps not well executed.
In any case, it has been very good to listen to your advice and take your course at Domestika. I will try to do more sessions with models to continue improving the portraits, practicing everything I have learned. Do you do face-to-face workshops or master classes?
I follow you in networks. I hear you. I learn. Thanks again for sharing knowledge!
A greeting.
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