Hello Diego, the first thing to do is excuse my delay in answering, I had a small accident and I have been sick for a few days.
Although I also confess that I saw the videos before it happened to me and I wanted to let it rest to tell you what I think is more relaxed.
My evaluation is made on the video "returning alone" since I do not understand that you leave the other clip, which for me is not a video clip, and that more than adding to your evaluation, it remains. Since I think that in addition to not removing anything, the other clip only shows me an improvisation on the beach, which gives me clues to imagine that both videos are not well thought out in advance, and that it is about placing the camera and start singing in front. That's why I don't want to talk about it, because I have many years of experience behind me, and I quickly detect when something has been done in a very short time but as I say above all improvising here and there, and the problem itself is not improvisation. time, but not having a clear and defined idea that makes sense with the song. But let's go with what I think is the main Clip;
I will start with what I like, and for that I will talk about the color retouch, which without being natural and being somewhat monotonous, since you keep it throughout the song, it seems beautiful to me when you play with the dark light in the cave. Let's say it seems that you've put a filter on everything, hence that feeling of lack of work, but I think there are moments that are beautiful. I'll tell you that I like the song, but being a clip of a singer in front of the camera, I miss in need that more things happen, or changes of locations. I think the main location is super cool and maybe with a change of optics you would have gotten even more beauty, I miss broken backgrounds or play with a 50mm for close-ups ...
But above all I will tell you that I do not like the use of camera accelerations, especially because I do not see any sense, and the only thing they tell the viewer is that since you do not know what to put there, you have played with the speeds. In general that gives it a very "amateur" touch, and I hate to tell you, but I have to.
I think you have an attitude and a good theme, but nevertheless there is a lack of pre-production and a basic idea, for me it is just the opposite of what I tell in the course, where I affect the idea of telling a story, (which does not have to be necessarily narrative, but emotional. Touching the viewer, either with actions or aesthetics).
For example, can you explain the ending to me? And as it has happened to me with a colleague of yours, can you tell me briefly that you want to have the video, that will help me to finish my evaluation.
My thanks for exposing you and for doing the exercise.
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Thank you very much for answering. The clip on the beach you are absolutely right. And with the other I intend to accompany the song, I would like to have been able to change optics, but they are videos made with my mobile, perhaps I lack knowledge in terms of apps and especially in terms of making good plans. And let alone in terms of editing video. I have done the course precisely because of that, the issue of having to do EVERYTHING, one person alone is complicated, but hey, it's about learning and improving. I really appreciate your comment. I will try to do better next time.
Thanks for caring. And I hope you recover as soon as possible!
A hug
@ednok Heyyy See, I didn't even know you had done it with your mobile, which makes me give you an extra point ;-) What I had imagined is that you had done it alone. And I assure you that I value it because I started like this myself! see if you cheat on someone, because of course in your case, a man orchestra takes all its meaning !!!!
In any case, don't stop creating and composing! and try to do some of the exercises in the course! big hug
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Teacher PlusHello Diego, the first thing to do is excuse my delay in answering, I had a small accident and I have been sick for a few days.
Although I also confess that I saw the videos before it happened to me and I wanted to let it rest to tell you what I think is more relaxed.
My evaluation is made on the video "returning alone" since I do not understand that you leave the other clip, which for me is not a video clip, and that more than adding to your evaluation, it remains. Since I think that in addition to not removing anything, the other clip only shows me an improvisation on the beach, which gives me clues to imagine that both videos are not well thought out in advance, and that it is about placing the camera and start singing in front. That's why I don't want to talk about it, because I have many years of experience behind me, and I quickly detect when something has been done in a very short time but as I say above all improvising here and there, and the problem itself is not improvisation. time, but not having a clear and defined idea that makes sense with the song. But let's go with what I think is the main Clip;
I will start with what I like, and for that I will talk about the color retouch, which without being natural and being somewhat monotonous, since you keep it throughout the song, it seems beautiful to me when you play with the dark light in the cave. Let's say it seems that you've put a filter on everything, hence that feeling of lack of work, but I think there are moments that are beautiful. I'll tell you that I like the song, but being a clip of a singer in front of the camera, I miss in need that more things happen, or changes of locations. I think the main location is super cool and maybe with a change of optics you would have gotten even more beauty, I miss broken backgrounds or play with a 50mm for close-ups ...
But above all I will tell you that I do not like the use of camera accelerations, especially because I do not see any sense, and the only thing they tell the viewer is that since you do not know what to put there, you have played with the speeds. In general that gives it a very "amateur" touch, and I hate to tell you, but I have to.
I think you have an attitude and a good theme, but nevertheless there is a lack of pre-production and a basic idea, for me it is just the opposite of what I tell in the course, where I affect the idea of telling a story, (which does not have to be necessarily narrative, but emotional. Touching the viewer, either with actions or aesthetics).
For example, can you explain the ending to me? And as it has happened to me with a colleague of yours, can you tell me briefly that you want to have the video, that will help me to finish my evaluation.
My thanks for exposing you and for doing the exercise.
a hug
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Thank you very much for answering. The clip on the beach you are absolutely right. And with the other I intend to accompany the song, I would like to have been able to change optics, but they are videos made with my mobile, perhaps I lack knowledge in terms of apps and especially in terms of making good plans. And let alone in terms of editing video. I have done the course precisely because of that, the issue of having to do EVERYTHING, one person alone is complicated, but hey, it's about learning and improving. I really appreciate your comment. I will try to do better next time.
Thanks for caring. And I hope you recover as soon as possible!
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Teacher Plus@ednok Heyyy See, I didn't even know you had done it with your mobile, which makes me give you an extra point ;-) What I had imagined is that you had done it alone. And I assure you that I value it because I started like this myself! see if you cheat on someone, because of course in your case, a man orchestra takes all its meaning !!!!
In any case, don't stop creating and composing! and try to do some of the exercises in the course! big hug
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I promise you Thank you Juanma!
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