Well Nelson, I confess that your clip is one of the ones that has surprised me the most to date! WOW, what energy !!
I'll tell you that although I really like rock, I don't usually listen to the hardest part of this genre, and without being a saint of my devotion, I liked the song to a large extent to your work after the video.
About the video I go in parts:
I think that on a visual level in the most technical part, I think it is very correct. Well executed shots, with good movements, especially at the beginning, where you use the cinematographic language to set the story, and you make good use of close-ups and detail shots, it's a shame that as the clip progresses that dissolves, giving too much importance to the band and to a succession of cut shots, more typical of a false live music program, with a syncopated montage, which for me greatly weighs down the rhythm and in general the interest of the clip that you had managed to create.
In the most creative part I also miss a little more originality, since as has happened to other colleagues with other genres (urban = girls and cars), you have pulled the aesthetic associated with the musical genre, with the epic and the old scroll (the ink, the fire ...) to illustrate a theme, which asked for a little more chicha (I think you have great locations, and perhaps with a little more you could create a little story and give more weight to the actors ). Perhaps what I am telling you seems somewhat harsh, however I am telling you this, because I see possibilities for you. I think you are clear on many concepts and therefore I have to be demanding.
About the color and texture finish, I will tell you that I love it from the middle of the video, when it is already sunset, where you have also used the fire particles correctly (be careful with the abuse!) And where I think you get more out of that epic tone of the clip. I'll also tell you to be careful with the abuse of backlit shots, because half of the playback of the band has the sun in front of it, and what in principle is COOL, ends up tiring. This abuse of FLARES SOLARES makes the rhythm confused and above all it makes you have the feeling of having seen the same image over and over again, also be careful with dirty lenses !!!! (A flare is great, but when it is not clean, it gives the feeling of error and amateur, check it) also I think that is in that part where I have missed the most that you use other planes.
All that said, I would have liked to see your previous exercises to help you. But in any case, I think you have made an effort and I value that very much. Thanks and I hope that correcting things, you get where you want!
@juanmacarrillo thank you Juanma, I am going to review the clip more carefully, actually the client asked me to give priority to the band, personally once finished the same happens to me, we should give more participation to the story, thank you very much for your comments, We will put them into practice !!
Greetings Nelson. This video clip as a work is the summary of a training process. You have included several processes that go beyond what this course is about, such as editing, shaping and coloring. A very good job! I see in the exercise a creative and aesthetic proposal that breaks with the scheme and concept with which videos of this type of music are made. With the beginning of the video, one cannot imagine that it will develop like this. Wish my point of view I feel that it is abused and reiterated in some effects that generate visual fatigue. However, it is an artistic and creative proposal that from the director's point of view will have a meaning and an explanation. In the treatment of the color that you gave it is related to the style of music, it is the use of a contrasting image technique.
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Teacher PlusWell Nelson, I confess that your clip is one of the ones that has surprised me the most to date! WOW, what energy !!
I'll tell you that although I really like rock, I don't usually listen to the hardest part of this genre, and without being a saint of my devotion, I liked the song to a large extent to your work after the video.
About the video I go in parts:
I think that on a visual level in the most technical part, I think it is very correct. Well executed shots, with good movements, especially at the beginning, where you use the cinematographic language to set the story, and you make good use of close-ups and detail shots, it's a shame that as the clip progresses that dissolves, giving too much importance to the band and to a succession of cut shots, more typical of a false live music program, with a syncopated montage, which for me greatly weighs down the rhythm and in general the interest of the clip that you had managed to create.
In the most creative part I also miss a little more originality, since as has happened to other colleagues with other genres (urban = girls and cars), you have pulled the aesthetic associated with the musical genre, with the epic and the old scroll (the ink, the fire ...) to illustrate a theme, which asked for a little more chicha (I think you have great locations, and perhaps with a little more you could create a little story and give more weight to the actors ). Perhaps what I am telling you seems somewhat harsh, however I am telling you this, because I see possibilities for you. I think you are clear on many concepts and therefore I have to be demanding.
About the color and texture finish, I will tell you that I love it from the middle of the video, when it is already sunset, where you have also used the fire particles correctly (be careful with the abuse!) And where I think you get more out of that epic tone of the clip. I'll also tell you to be careful with the abuse of backlit shots, because half of the playback of the band has the sun in front of it, and what in principle is COOL, ends up tiring. This abuse of FLARES SOLARES makes the rhythm confused and above all it makes you have the feeling of having seen the same image over and over again, also be careful with dirty lenses !!!! (A flare is great, but when it is not clean, it gives the feeling of error and amateur, check it) also I think that is in that part where I have missed the most that you use other planes.
All that said, I would have liked to see your previous exercises to help you. But in any case, I think you have made an effort and I value that very much. Thanks and I hope that correcting things, you get where you want!
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@juanmacarrillo thank you Juanma, I am going to review the clip more carefully, actually the client asked me to give priority to the band, personally once finished the same happens to me, we should give more participation to the story, thank you very much for your comments, We will put them into practice !!
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PlusGreetings Nelson. This video clip as a work is the summary of a training process. You have included several processes that go beyond what this course is about, such as editing, shaping and coloring. A very good job! I see in the exercise a creative and aesthetic proposal that breaks with the scheme and concept with which videos of this type of music are made. With the beginning of the video, one cannot imagine that it will develop like this. Wish my point of view I feel that it is abused and reiterated in some effects that generate visual fatigue. However, it is an artistic and creative proposal that from the director's point of view will have a meaning and an explanation. In the treatment of the color that you gave it is related to the style of music, it is the use of a contrasting image technique.
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