Well done, it’s a great job! 🤩 You have understood the different steps and tools of the course. Your job now is to remove the traces of these tools, by creating your own visual and semantic language. Like a designer who hides the seams of the clothes he creates. Try to think about the benefits of your product for your customers. You can have fun creating this world with the “manga” iconography like at the beginning of your presentation. Pay attention to small spelling errors, there are some in your texts and this can reduce the credibility of your document. In any case, it's a beautiful piece of work, a beautiful product that deserves to be taken very far! 😊
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Teacher PlusWell done, it’s a great job! 🤩 You have understood the different steps and tools of the course. Your job now is to remove the traces of these tools, by creating your own visual and semantic language. Like a designer who hides the seams of the clothes he creates. Try to think about the benefits of your product for your customers. You can have fun creating this world with the “manga” iconography like at the beginning of your presentation. Pay attention to small spelling errors, there are some in your texts and this can reduce the credibility of your document. In any case, it's a beautiful piece of work, a beautiful product that deserves to be taken very far! 😊
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Plus@guillaume_sherkan Thanks a lot for your feedback. definitely I will work on your inputs
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