Good work on this! The character is super sweet :) I also like how you presented it, every phase is well structured and it makes sense with the explanation of the project. I would like to see a bit more context, maybe, and the final work applied to the phone/computer screen! I think it would make it even more grounded.
I would just say for you to watch out for the different styles you present throughout the presentation! We see sketches with different lines and languages, and then we see a character with full lineart and flat colors and then no lineart and softer colors. To do a pass and standardize everything would make it stronger. And last thing, watch out for the contrast! We're losing visibility into some aspects of the character against the white background.
Other than that, great work! Keep up the good work 😊❤️
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Teacher PlusHi Shearlly!
Good work on this! The character is super sweet :) I also like how you presented it, every phase is well structured and it makes sense with the explanation of the project. I would like to see a bit more context, maybe, and the final work applied to the phone/computer screen! I think it would make it even more grounded.
I would just say for you to watch out for the different styles you present throughout the presentation! We see sketches with different lines and languages, and then we see a character with full lineart and flat colors and then no lineart and softer colors. To do a pass and standardize everything would make it stronger. And last thing, watch out for the contrast! We're losing visibility into some aspects of the character against the white background.
Other than that, great work! Keep up the good work 😊❤️
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