Hello Victor! Very cool. Nice that you liked the course :)
Without knowing exactly the concept behind the poster, perhaps the white color in the glass would have stood out more to create more contrast and subtract darkness from that area.
And for the typography I would have used only white and green. Now I see the texts too hidden.
Finally, I would have tried a different typeface, something simpler.
Otherwise, congratulations on the texture work and the atmosphere you have created. Cheers!
Thank you very much for the comments @oscargimenez you are @oscargimenez right. As soon as I can, I'll retouch it and add the final project to it. Thank you very much and greetings :)
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Here is my final project of the course, I have loved it, thanks to the teacher above all :), I hope you criticize for future corrections.
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Staff PlusHello Victor! Very cool. Nice that you liked the course :)
Without knowing exactly the concept behind the poster, perhaps the white color in the glass would have stood out more to create more contrast and subtract darkness from that area.
And for the typography I would have used only white and green. Now I see the texts too hidden.
Finally, I would have tried a different typeface, something simpler.
Otherwise, congratulations on the texture work and the atmosphere you have created. Cheers!
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Thank you very much for the comments @oscargimenez you are @oscargimenez right. As soon as I can, I'll retouch it and add the final project to it. Thank you very much and greetings :)
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Well here is my final version of the retouched project, I hope you like it.
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Staff PlusBetter, Victor! ;)
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