Good job, your resume has a lot of text and there are many hits. I'll give you some details to improve it.
Hello must go with exclamations when opening and closing. This is a peculiarity of the Spanish language and we cannot ignore either of the two signs.
The sentences that you write with the bowling pins must have a period at the end because they are not epigraphs: they are sentences with full grammatical sense.
Foreign words such as branding or marketing should be in italics if we write in Spanish.
There is a line break between located and lime that makes the flag of the composition ugly.
I see the rest well: very well the plechas, dates and the wording in general. Good job!
1 comment
displayname172098
Teacher PlusHello, @mateoglv :
Good job, your resume has a lot of text and there are many hits. I'll give you some details to improve it.
Hello must go with exclamations when opening and closing. This is a peculiarity of the Spanish language and we cannot ignore either of the two signs.
The sentences that you write with the bowling pins must have a period at the end because they are not epigraphs: they are sentences with full grammatical sense.
Foreign words such as branding or marketing should be in italics if we write in Spanish.
There is a line break between located and lime that makes the flag of the composition ugly.
I see the rest well: very well the plechas, dates and the wording in general. Good job!
See original
Hide original
Log in or join for Free to comment