Nice work, @joao_cintra ! Seeing how you have turned these complex processes into comparable situations is great. Your visuals make each step understandable! All the elements of your story are there. You might consider re-arranging the elements slightly to emphasize the key issue and create two comparable situations. In the bottom solution, it's very clear that there is a solid process connecting all the steps. You could highlight the missing connection in the current state, so it becomes clear what the challenge is and how you are solving it in the future. I have created a drawing to show you an alternative structure; I just can't share images in this project section of Domestika. I'll upload a message for you in the community (section: Incorporate Feedback and Improve Your Drawing) and tag you :-) Thanks for sharing your awesome work!!
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Teacher PlusNice work, @joao_cintra ! Seeing how you have turned these complex processes into comparable situations is great. Your visuals make each step understandable! All the elements of your story are there. You might consider re-arranging the elements slightly to emphasize the key issue and create two comparable situations. In the bottom solution, it's very clear that there is a solid process connecting all the steps. You could highlight the missing connection in the current state, so it becomes clear what the challenge is and how you are solving it in the future. I have created a drawing to show you an alternative structure; I just can't share images in this project section of Domestika. I'll upload a message for you in the community (section: Incorporate Feedback and Improve Your Drawing) and tag you :-) Thanks for sharing your awesome work!!
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