Everything is quite well integrated and has a nice look. What would change is the horizon. I see that it is a very common mistake to put the horizon line too high (a mistake that I also make from time to time). It should be lower.
There are some fumes behind that are going to jerk, possibly because they have slowed them down. It should go much smoother.
The tombs look a bit similar and the integration with the ground, although not bad, needs more variety. Finally, the shadows of the central tomb behind Amelia is totally different from the rest of the tombs. It would have to be checked.
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Everything is quite well integrated and has a nice look. What would change is the horizon. I see that it is a very common mistake to put the horizon line too high (a mistake that I also make from time to time). It should be lower.
There are some fumes behind that are going to jerk, possibly because they have slowed them down. It should go much smoother.
The tombs look a bit similar and the integration with the ground, although not bad, needs more variety. Finally, the shadows of the central tomb behind Amelia is totally different from the rest of the tombs. It would have to be checked.
But you are on the right track!
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