You get off to a good start and the first page is very visually eloquent. I feel however that the story is unfinished and that on each page you use different visual codes. Try to give it a close and work it in pencil so that you do not compromise the finished illustration so much.
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Teacher PlusYou get off to a good start and the first page is very visually eloquent. I feel however that the story is unfinished and that on each page you use different visual codes. Try to give it a close and work it in pencil so that you do not compromise the finished illustration so much.
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