@elombligoylapelusa Thank you for sharing your project with us and for participating in the course! I like the result you have reached, the limited palette makes the project have visual unity, it is simple but it is not monotonous, maybe you can give a little more saturation and luminosity to the red / brown that is very dark in contrast to the green . The compositions are very interesting, and they give a dynamic rhythm to the reading of the book.
On the other hand, be careful with the use of typography and the limits or safe composition guidelines, which are very close to the edges. You also have to adjust the spacing, which is very wide. I think that with an extra work of these things that I have mentioned, and additionally a cover proposal that has the full title (even if the symbols are understood, it can be confusing) with that it will be ready to present it to publishers. Hopefully you can publish it and that you keep in touch with the children's publishing medium.
@carloshiguera Thank you very much for taking time to see the project.
I will take your recommendations into account.
Thank you again and I found it a very interesting course.
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On the other hand, be careful with the use of typography and the limits or safe composition guidelines, which are very close to the edges. You also have to adjust the spacing, which is very wide. I think that with an extra work of these things that I have mentioned, and additionally a cover proposal that has the full title (even if the symbols are understood, it can be confusing) with that it will be ready to present it to publishers. Hopefully you can publish it and that you keep in touch with the children's publishing medium.
I also recommend that you see our kawaii character design course, if you are interested, it can be an interesting complement to your creative process: https://www.domestika.org/es/courses/258-diseno-de-personajes-estilo-kawaii/estudiokudasai
Cheers! 👨🎨
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@carloshiguera Thank you very much for taking time to see the project.
I will take your recommendations into account.
Thank you again and I found it a very interesting course.
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