I loved the brand, but it has a reading problem. That happens to designers: we see and recognize perfectly why the idea was born and is in our head ... but the other one, no.
I read "GUOROMO". If it hadn't been written in clear "Guaramo" I would never have deciphered it since, above all, I'm not from Venezuela. The name should be able to be read by anyone.
Suggestion: that the right stick of the letter "A" is straight and does not turn inwards. That way it would look more like a lowercase "a" (avant garde type) or at least it wouldn't close in on itself, making it closer to an "O"
The application colors offered are all in hex. If it is a clothing line, it should consider applications that can be reproduced in textiles. Doubt: I don't know if a brand should have so many color variants.
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I loved the brand, but it has a reading problem. That happens to designers: we see and recognize perfectly why the idea was born and is in our head ... but the other one, no.
I read "GUOROMO". If it hadn't been written in clear "Guaramo" I would never have deciphered it since, above all, I'm not from Venezuela. The name should be able to be read by anyone.
Suggestion: that the right stick of the letter "A" is straight and does not turn inwards. That way it would look more like a lowercase "a" (avant garde type) or at least it wouldn't close in on itself, making it closer to an "O"
The application colors offered are all in hex. If it is a clothing line, it should consider applications that can be reproduced in textiles. Doubt: I don't know if a brand should have so many color variants.
Greetings. / Fabio de Salterain
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