Congratulations, Flower! You made a lot of progress :) What a joy to see so many finished pages. You can tell that you worked a lot and I'm curious if you have more pages in mind to continue telling the story. I imagine that a good help could be to write down all the memories you have about the history of your grandparents, ask other members of the family, look at photos. It intrigues me if the story is going to focus on them or at some point the narrator will appear who for now is only telling us the story. Those are things that if they are not yet clear, they will surely clear up as the pages go by. I find that the colors work very well, I like that the pages are very dynamic. In some, red predominates, in others blue. This use of color can be a good resource to support you throughout the story. Tell us how your project continues, do you have a plan or are you improvising?
Congratulations again!
Hello Maria! if the intention is to continue it and at some point talk about me when I lived in my grandmother's house, when I went to study there. Hehe but it takes a loooong time. I'm going to follow him and consult with you and my compas, my doubts. Thank you very much for your returns, reading suggestions and more. I am taking them and delving into this world of the graphic novel that I find amazing! Very happy to have started it with you!
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PlusBeautiful!!!
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Lehrkraft PlusCongratulations, Flower! You made a lot of progress :) What a joy to see so many finished pages. You can tell that you worked a lot and I'm curious if you have more pages in mind to continue telling the story. I imagine that a good help could be to write down all the memories you have about the history of your grandparents, ask other members of the family, look at photos. It intrigues me if the story is going to focus on them or at some point the narrator will appear who for now is only telling us the story. Those are things that if they are not yet clear, they will surely clear up as the pages go by. I find that the colors work very well, I like that the pages are very dynamic. In some, red predominates, in others blue. This use of color can be a good resource to support you throughout the story. Tell us how your project continues, do you have a plan or are you improvising?
Congratulations again!
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Hello Maria! if the intention is to continue it and at some point talk about me when I lived in my grandmother's house, when I went to study there. Hehe but it takes a loooong time. I'm going to follow him and consult with you and my compas, my doubts. Thank you very much for your returns, reading suggestions and more. I am taking them and delving into this world of the graphic novel that I find amazing! Very happy to have started it with you!
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Uau!! This is amazing!! :) <3
What a beautiful motivation to start illustrating!!
Thank you!!!
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Jeez, it can't be that beautiful. It's great
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Thank you very much girls! His words encourage me to keep working on him!
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I loved it, I laughed a lot. Please continue with the story. Greetings.
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I really liked it, especially that it is done in the classic style and that it tells "first person" type stories. CONGRATULATIONS!
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