Mar, I was impressed by the chosen theme, the audacity in exposing it. It seems like a very good choice. Let's go to some observations, with your permission: the scales are usually -because they are better understood- from 0 to 10. In fact it is the same, but it is a convention, I like to use the conventions, everyone understands them. Again: less is more: what does the image of the bicycle or the leaves bring? I believe that nothing, on the contrary, or they complicate the reading - case of the sheets - or they send a message that does not fit in with the theme - case of the bicycle, although I read that there is a reference in the text. As you use a color legend, every color in your graph can be interpreted with that palette, for example the dotted line under the hours of the day. They mean that from 9 to 17 'you salivate and think of food'? Because this color matches the legend, but the front and back section of the line does not match any other color in the legend.
Now, the most important thing: every day of the week has 24 hours, the bars should therefore be exactly equal in size. Ops, Mar, I hope I wasn't too hard ... Because I really admire your determination and courage, and the result is GOOD, but it can always be improved -always- and when we no longer see how it is impossible to improve it. I really congratulate you and I appreciate the whole process of the course.
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Now, the most important thing: every day of the week has 24 hours, the bars should therefore be exactly equal in size. Ops, Mar, I hope I wasn't too hard ... Because I really admire your determination and courage, and the result is GOOD, but it can always be improved -always- and when we no longer see how it is impossible to improve it. I really congratulate you and I appreciate the whole process of the course.
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