First of all, thank you for sharing your video with us.
I really liked the performance, congratulations.
The tone of voice is perfect and the story is beautiful. I saw that there was a moment when there was an "error", a small interruption in the story. The next time you forget a part of the narrative or get confused, just use silence, glances, repetitions to get back to the narrative.
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Lehrkraft PlusFirst of all, thank you for sharing your video with us.
I really liked the performance, congratulations.
The tone of voice is perfect and the story is beautiful. I saw that there was a moment when there was an "error", a small interruption in the story. The next time you forget a part of the narrative or get confused, just use silence, glances, repetitions to get back to the narrative.
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Thanks a lot
I will take your comment into consideration, I think it is very accurate.
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