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Well done. There's an intriguing character here, and now the task is to make sure the stakes are always emotionally high in the story, and that your character is actively pushing the story. Good luck with it
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Lehrkraft PlusCongratulations! I will read this next week and give feedback. Thanks!
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Lehrkraft PlusWell done. There's an intriguing character here, and now the task is to make sure the stakes are always emotionally high in the story, and that your character is actively pushing the story. Good luck with it
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