Hi @makomustdie .
Thank you for taking the course and submitting your project.
I'm traveling until the end of the month. When I return I will comment on the photos here.
Happy New Year!
Hi @makomustdie !
Congratulations on the work, and thank you for sending it.
I really like how you handled the night lights. The colors and compositions work, the high lights don't blow out and we can still see a lot of interesting details in the shadows.
Regarding the project, the narrative is well structured, and the theme is great. I like how you combined details, like the lights and the shot, with the characters, but I think there was a lack of delving a little deeper into the main character's memories, into what really happened that night. Only two of the photos deviate from the details of the environment and suggest a narrative, I thought it was a little short and I wanted to see more of the unfolding of this story, from a closer and more intimate point of view.
Maybe you have more things in your file, or maybe it's worth delving deeper into this part of the "script".
But like I said, there's a lot of potential there.
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Lehrkraft PlusHi @makomustdie .
Thank you for taking the course and submitting your project.
I'm traveling until the end of the month. When I return I will comment on the photos here.
Happy New Year!
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displayname1829004
Lehrkraft PlusHi @makomustdie !
Congratulations on the work, and thank you for sending it.
I really like how you handled the night lights. The colors and compositions work, the high lights don't blow out and we can still see a lot of interesting details in the shadows.
Regarding the project, the narrative is well structured, and the theme is great. I like how you combined details, like the lights and the shot, with the characters, but I think there was a lack of delving a little deeper into the main character's memories, into what really happened that night. Only two of the photos deviate from the details of the environment and suggest a narrative, I thought it was a little short and I wanted to see more of the unfolding of this story, from a closer and more intimate point of view.
Maybe you have more things in your file, or maybe it's worth delving deeper into this part of the "script".
But like I said, there's a lot of potential there.
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