The robot looks great. Congratulations on the good result. The pieces are very good. I like the thickness you've given to the edges of everything. That rounded frame fits the screen well for your style.
The camera framing is fine, it's cinematic.
The lighting is correct, you can appreciate the entire volume of each piece with its details very well.
The belt strap can perhaps be beveled a bit, that will give you extra detail by reflecting light without having to model anything else.
Something that can improve the reading of the character's silhouette is avoiding tangents. Like on the side of the left arm, if you move that arm away a bit, you'll see the negative space.
I hope the course has served you, keep practicing. Take advantage of your knowledge with lighting and camera to present everything or that you do in the same way you will get a lot out of it.
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Lehrkraft PlusHello Davidson,
The robot looks great. Congratulations on the good result. The pieces are very good. I like the thickness you've given to the edges of everything. That rounded frame fits the screen well for your style.
The camera framing is fine, it's cinematic.
The lighting is correct, you can appreciate the entire volume of each piece with its details very well.
The belt strap can perhaps be beveled a bit, that will give you extra detail by reflecting light without having to model anything else.
Something that can improve the reading of the character's silhouette is avoiding tangents. Like on the side of the left arm, if you move that arm away a bit, you'll see the negative space.
I hope the course has served you, keep practicing. Take advantage of your knowledge with lighting and camera to present everything or that you do in the same way you will get a lot out of it.
All the best!
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