Bravo! This is wonderful. Your synopsis is so well executed: the plot points and the twists are exactly right. I particularly love the discovery that Agent Smith is an AI, and then the revelations about the virtual reality, and their escape from it. I can very much see this on Netflix or similar. It's totally gripping.
Your world building is accomplished, and as a reader I feel I'm in very safe hands.
With your prose, do just keep everything precise and clear. With another edit you'll find that happens easily.
This is such amazing work - congratulations!
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@annabolena989 Thanks a lot!
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Lehrkraft PlusBravo! This is wonderful. Your synopsis is so well executed: the plot points and the twists are exactly right. I particularly love the discovery that Agent Smith is an AI, and then the revelations about the virtual reality, and their escape from it. I can very much see this on Netflix or similar. It's totally gripping.
Your world building is accomplished, and as a reader I feel I'm in very safe hands.
With your prose, do just keep everything precise and clear. With another edit you'll find that happens easily.
This is such amazing work - congratulations!
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