This is a really lovely little concept and I really quite like the design presented, as well as the process you outline in your project here. I think all the way up to the lines and flat colour, the read was both clear and clean, and though the application of values has a little less of that signature confidence to it, the final comes out as a pretty strong read.
The concept as presented is therefore great, the written part really got me interested, and so I would like to take a look a the logic of your design and discuss how it might be improved.
First off, I would emphasize the bleakness of the setting by having her hold the young lizard and the egg much closer to her, perhaps having a carrying implement on her so that she could use her hands, and as well with the bottles, I love the big weird round bottles, but try and make it part of her pack so that we can get the sense that they are travelling around. Here is a great chance at telling more of a story of their dangerous life in detail, showing us how things have gotten adapted.
Other than that, this is a great little piece, very well done! :D
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Thank you very much for your feedback Even!
It really makes me want to dig deeper into the character, or make more concepts of its different phases within the story. Perhaps in the near future I will give the idea one more turn and apply the feedback you tell me, I think it would be very interesting.
Thanks again for creating this course. I've had a great time! :D
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Lehrkraft PlusThis is a really lovely little concept and I really quite like the design presented, as well as the process you outline in your project here. I think all the way up to the lines and flat colour, the read was both clear and clean, and though the application of values has a little less of that signature confidence to it, the final comes out as a pretty strong read.
The concept as presented is therefore great, the written part really got me interested, and so I would like to take a look a the logic of your design and discuss how it might be improved.
First off, I would emphasize the bleakness of the setting by having her hold the young lizard and the egg much closer to her, perhaps having a carrying implement on her so that she could use her hands, and as well with the bottles, I love the big weird round bottles, but try and make it part of her pack so that we can get the sense that they are travelling around. Here is a great chance at telling more of a story of their dangerous life in detail, showing us how things have gotten adapted.
Other than that, this is a great little piece, very well done! :D
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@evenmehlamundsen
Thank you very much for your feedback Even!
It really makes me want to dig deeper into the character, or make more concepts of its different phases within the story. Perhaps in the near future I will give the idea one more turn and apply the feedback you tell me, I think it would be very interesting.
Thanks again for creating this course. I've had a great time! :D
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