Hi Eduardo!
First I want to thank you for taking the time to do the course. I hope you liked it and I hope you have learned a lot.
Your work is very interesting. I love that you have chosen an angle that is unusual and not easy to develop. Show your spatial skills and your drawing skills. The technique is also very well executed. A smooth texture, the absence of a border line that adds to your work and a good sense of light and shadow which is crucial to make our work believable. Excellent.
I see that the upper right is a bit blurry. I do not know if it was the idea or an accident when taking the photograph. Whichever it is, I find it works well because it adds more depth to the work.
I think the composition of the work should be revised. I think there are spaces that do not seem well justified and cause the balance of the work to be lost a bit. This is something that you can easily improve when making the sketches (I call them the pre-sketches) which are very simple drawings that help us organize the elements that we are going to use in the work to find their balance.
On the other hand, I think you can darken the inside of the figure's head. This to create more contrast in general and because it is the part that is receiving the least light, in addition, in certain areas the elements are a bit confused because they have a similar percentage of tone.
I think overall it's a good job. The technique is beautiful and so is the drawing. I congratulate you and thank you again for being part of the class.
Master, thank you for giving me your comment and of course I will do my best to improve the composition. I want to tell you that I am an admirer of your work and it fills me with great joy to receive your suggestions. Thanks!
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First I want to thank you for taking the time to do the course. I hope you liked it and I hope you have learned a lot.
Your work is very interesting. I love that you have chosen an angle that is unusual and not easy to develop. Show your spatial skills and your drawing skills. The technique is also very well executed. A smooth texture, the absence of a border line that adds to your work and a good sense of light and shadow which is crucial to make our work believable. Excellent.
I see that the upper right is a bit blurry. I do not know if it was the idea or an accident when taking the photograph. Whichever it is, I find it works well because it adds more depth to the work.
I think the composition of the work should be revised. I think there are spaces that do not seem well justified and cause the balance of the work to be lost a bit. This is something that you can easily improve when making the sketches (I call them the pre-sketches) which are very simple drawings that help us organize the elements that we are going to use in the work to find their balance.
On the other hand, I think you can darken the inside of the figure's head. This to create more contrast in general and because it is the part that is receiving the least light, in addition, in certain areas the elements are a bit confused because they have a similar percentage of tone.
I think overall it's a good job. The technique is beautiful and so is the drawing. I congratulate you and thank you again for being part of the class.
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Master, thank you for giving me your comment and of course I will do my best to improve the composition. I want to tell you that I am an admirer of your work and it fills me with great joy to receive your suggestions. Thanks!
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