Very good work @astronauta_png ! The synthesis of the character, the expression, the textures are very well worked out, I love how the limited palette works in the background. Very good!
I was watching the process in the forum, thanks for sharing it. I make two comments as a suggestion, to take into account in the future :)
-Figure / background integration: the decision of the black borders for the character vs. the full background with a limited palette is absolutely valid (in fact in many cartoons the characters have more detail and are dissociated from the background to be able to highlight them more), perhaps I would seek that the character has * something * from the background. For example: some of the blue and / or red in the background, or some of the texture that appears in those arches. Even the black line of the character could be the dark blue of the background.
-Composition / framing: as in your illustration the focus is on the character (on how he is characterized and on his expression, which is super well resolved); I think it could be enlarged a little bigger to be able to see it in more detail, or a frame a little closer.
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Lehrkraft PlusVery good work @astronauta_png ! The synthesis of the character, the expression, the textures are very well worked out, I love how the limited palette works in the background. Very good!
I was watching the process in the forum, thanks for sharing it. I make two comments as a suggestion, to take into account in the future :)
-Figure / background integration: the decision of the black borders for the character vs. the full background with a limited palette is absolutely valid (in fact in many cartoons the characters have more detail and are dissociated from the background to be able to highlight them more), perhaps I would seek that the character has * something * from the background. For example: some of the blue and / or red in the background, or some of the texture that appears in those arches. Even the black line of the character could be the dark blue of the background.
-Composition / framing: as in your illustration the focus is on the character (on how he is characterized and on his expression, which is super well resolved); I think it could be enlarged a little bigger to be able to see it in more detail, or a frame a little closer.
Big hug and I hope you enjoyed the course !!
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