Wow! Very cool everything.
We will tell you a couple of things to improve it and make it very fine.
1. The description texts of each award are very large and eat up the illustration. Here you have two possibilities: reduce the size a bit and thus gain contrast or remove the boldness.
2. We miss a headline at the top left and an explanatory text about the Darwin Awards, because in infographics it is important to make it clear what the subject is about and prevent the reader from getting frustrated.
3. The base of the D may be too large and understates the D itself and the illustrated situations for each award.
Well, your vision and your composition are very particular. Congratulations!
It has indeed improved.
Well, it is not yet known. But it would be cool, to see what happens with a more advanced step. It depends a lot on the demand. :)
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displayname47859
Professor PlusWow! Very cool everything.
We will tell you a couple of things to improve it and make it very fine.
1. The description texts of each award are very large and eat up the illustration. Here you have two possibilities: reduce the size a bit and thus gain contrast or remove the boldness.
2. We miss a headline at the top left and an explanatory text about the Darwin Awards, because in infographics it is important to make it clear what the subject is about and prevent the reader from getting frustrated.
3. The base of the D may be too large and understates the D itself and the illustrated situations for each award.
Well, your vision and your composition are very particular. Congratulations!
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Thanks for the quick response :).
I have made the changes and I think it is much more understandable now. I don't know what you think?
Thanks in advance. By the way are you going to do a second course? I have read some comment about it.
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Professor PlusIt has indeed improved.
Well, it is not yet known. But it would be cool, to see what happens with a more advanced step. It depends a lot on the demand. :)
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