Thanks for sharing Itzel, in general I see it very well, I suggest improving the copies. Almost all of them contain exclamation points and are very promotional. Remember that the more relaxed the message, the better you will be able to connect with your audience. What are key points in your message that you could tell your best friend in a casual conversation? How about something like: If you need to transform your brand / give your brand a new look, our design and advertising team is ready to team up with you. Send a message and get an exclusive discount are you ready to get started? or something like Do you feel like your brand/product needs a refresh? / If your brand speaks to boomers and you are looking to talk to more millennials, we are the team you need to give your brand a new look.
You may make it feel a little lighter, but you're on a VERY good path.
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Professor PlusThanks for sharing Itzel, in general I see it very well, I suggest improving the copies. Almost all of them contain exclamation points and are very promotional. Remember that the more relaxed the message, the better you will be able to connect with your audience. What are key points in your message that you could tell your best friend in a casual conversation? How about something like: If you need to transform your brand / give your brand a new look, our design and advertising team is ready to team up with you. Send a message and get an exclusive discount are you ready to get started? or something like Do you feel like your brand/product needs a refresh? / If your brand speaks to boomers and you are looking to talk to more millennials, we are the team you need to give your brand a new look.
You may make it feel a little lighter, but you're on a VERY good path.
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@jimenagadea Hello! Thanks for sharing knowledge. How can one improve their copies? I mean maybe one can take a course on storytelling.
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