This is a great process, and one worth picking apart a bit to see where you stay solid, and where things get a little nuts.
The construction is super solid, the layering the same. The expression is great, and the whole story, basing the style on game-art as a meta is really smart and gives you a lot of leeway as far as believability goes. All the way down to flat lines and colors, therefore you are golden.
The problems come in with the lights and the values. Your base light layup is pretty good, with a few flaws you’d be well advised to go looking for an figure out, and as their application get a little haphazard, the following effort to apply illustration effects results in a flatter image, rather than one with greater depth.
With all that having been said, this is a great effort, and I giggled all the way through the desc. Very very well done c:
Thank you for your deep feedback. It's awesome such a very valuable artist like you spend a part of your time on analyzing the art from dummies like me. It helps so much for the community and we are very grateful for you.
I really enjoyed running throw this course: it was a blessing to see every second while you were drawing. Also having your resources to analyze is an inexhaustible source of knowledge.
Now my focus is on the weakness you told me for improving the quality of my art and put a stone in the road to become a concept artist.
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Professor PlusAll Hail Axe!
This is a great process, and one worth picking apart a bit to see where you stay solid, and where things get a little nuts.
The construction is super solid, the layering the same. The expression is great, and the whole story, basing the style on game-art as a meta is really smart and gives you a lot of leeway as far as believability goes. All the way down to flat lines and colors, therefore you are golden.
The problems come in with the lights and the values. Your base light layup is pretty good, with a few flaws you’d be well advised to go looking for an figure out, and as their application get a little haphazard, the following effort to apply illustration effects results in a flatter image, rather than one with greater depth.
With all that having been said, this is a great effort, and I giggled all the way through the desc. Very very well done c:
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Plus@evenmehlamundsen Hey Even!
Thank you for your deep feedback. It's awesome such a very valuable artist like you spend a part of your time on analyzing the art from dummies like me. It helps so much for the community and we are very grateful for you.
I really enjoyed running throw this course: it was a blessing to see every second while you were drawing. Also having your resources to analyze is an inexhaustible source of knowledge.
Now my focus is on the weakness you told me for improving the quality of my art and put a stone in the road to become a concept artist.
Thank you again and again. You are so big!
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