I love! The plot picks up speed from the magic hats. Perhaps it would add some surprise to the rabbit who is supposed to be in a hurry somewhere, but he deviates and becomes enthusiastic about the tea, when he sees her at the mara remove the cups from her hat. Like somehow she "teaches" him that magic and he starts doing the same with his top hat for the guests, right? If you do not lose a little the idea that it is a rabbit from the city, and as if nothing suits that magical world at first. It's just a suggestion, maybe with a sentence at that height and voila. For the rest, I see it very well. :)
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