@puntohara Hola Luis, Antes de nada, me encantan tus fotos! There is so much story in each one, and I like how almost all of them have an element of reflection in them: off glass, off the tabletop, as if there is always another world, another reality that we don't see clearly, but is there. I enjoyed the journey that the photos take us on.
The writing is powerful, and I like your exploration of how words make the (our) world but are also only just symbols that represent the world. My suggestion would be to include a few more personal anecdotes – basically, to translate some of the photos into words and make them part of the story, more details about the role writing has had in your life. I think that would make the writing even more impactful! Thanks so much for sharing your words with us, and for your kind words about the course. Un abrazo desde Madrid!
Dear Shaun, how interesting your words, I had not noticed that other world that is reflected in the glass. They say that nothing comes out at random, and in some way I have reflected that world something mysterious in the glass and that it is part of me. Excellent your feedback dear Shau on including more personal details in my story. Thank you very much, very happy with your feedback and your dedicated and kind words.
It was really a pleasure to make contact and we certainly continue in this great workshop.
A hug and that you are very well.
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Prowadzący Plus@puntohara Hola Luis, Antes de nada, me encantan tus fotos! There is so much story in each one, and I like how almost all of them have an element of reflection in them: off glass, off the tabletop, as if there is always another world, another reality that we don't see clearly, but is there. I enjoyed the journey that the photos take us on.
The writing is powerful, and I like your exploration of how words make the (our) world but are also only just symbols that represent the world. My suggestion would be to include a few more personal anecdotes – basically, to translate some of the photos into words and make them part of the story, more details about the role writing has had in your life. I think that would make the writing even more impactful! Thanks so much for sharing your words with us, and for your kind words about the course. Un abrazo desde Madrid!
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Dear Shaun, how interesting your words, I had not noticed that other world that is reflected in the glass. They say that nothing comes out at random, and in some way I have reflected that world something mysterious in the glass and that it is part of me. Excellent your feedback dear Shau on including more personal details in my story. Thank you very much, very happy with your feedback and your dedicated and kind words.
It was really a pleasure to make contact and we certainly continue in this great workshop.
A hug and that you are very well.
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