Hello Andres!
Thanks for posting your project. The concept approach is straightforward and easy to understand, it works best on the green bud image. The test tube image has a slightly more complex reading.
There is a typographic aspect that you can improve in general, especially in the larger sizes. If you close the interline you will have visually more compact blocks. It also happens in the title-logo, if you close the interline between "The seed of" with "science" it will work better.
I see too much information on the poster, it would be necessary to try to clean the texts, put the basic information and send the viewer to a URL where they can consult the complete information. Or maybe it is published on social networks and you can complete the message with the text that accompanies the publication. You always have to try to work with the minimum information, you have to compress the entire message in the fewest characters and keep the main messages, giving the viewer the possibility of completing the message through external links.
Thank you very much for sharing on the forum! Cheers!!
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Insegnante PlusHello Andres!
Thanks for posting your project. The concept approach is straightforward and easy to understand, it works best on the green bud image. The test tube image has a slightly more complex reading.
There is a typographic aspect that you can improve in general, especially in the larger sizes. If you close the interline you will have visually more compact blocks. It also happens in the title-logo, if you close the interline between "The seed of" with "science" it will work better.
I see too much information on the poster, it would be necessary to try to clean the texts, put the basic information and send the viewer to a URL where they can consult the complete information. Or maybe it is published on social networks and you can complete the message with the text that accompanies the publication. You always have to try to work with the minimum information, you have to compress the entire message in the fewest characters and keep the main messages, giving the viewer the possibility of completing the message through external links.
Thank you very much for sharing on the forum! Cheers!!
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