The figure was very beautiful! I love the way you incorporated the flowers and I find the cuts to be very clean and very well done!
My general observation is in the face area. It seems to me that the eye has elements that are left over, you could simplify them to make it read in a more natural way. Mainly, the layer above the eye should only be the eyelid, that is, this layer should only be "the hollow" of the eyelid. Behind this layer would go the rest of the detail of the white part of the eye and the iris.
Then I don't know if you did it on purpose but on the paper version she looks a little sadder. If you look at the reference photo, the eye shadow (the color on the eyelid) has more of an upward curve than a downward curve (u-curve instead of n-curve) this is also a detail that could make the expression is a little more neutral.
In the same way the work is beautiful and the detail of the flowers was great! Cheers!!!
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Hello Ale
I have chosen a profile face to be different from the course and so that you can correct my mistakes.
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Insegnante PlusHi Clara!
The figure was very beautiful! I love the way you incorporated the flowers and I find the cuts to be very clean and very well done!
My general observation is in the face area. It seems to me that the eye has elements that are left over, you could simplify them to make it read in a more natural way. Mainly, the layer above the eye should only be the eyelid, that is, this layer should only be "the hollow" of the eyelid. Behind this layer would go the rest of the detail of the white part of the eye and the iris.
Then I don't know if you did it on purpose but on the paper version she looks a little sadder. If you look at the reference photo, the eye shadow (the color on the eyelid) has more of an upward curve than a downward curve (u-curve instead of n-curve) this is also a detail that could make the expression is a little more neutral.
In the same way the work is beautiful and the detail of the flowers was great! Cheers!!!
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Oh, I'm dying!
But how nice it was, it's beautiful, I love it.
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@alerambar Thank you very much. I'm going to read it and follow your advice. a greeting
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Thanks a lot :)
How happy your comment makes me !!
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