Wow! The level of detail in the drawings is great! Well done. I like the choice of font and how well the text fits together.
Speaking of the first image, I think it could have more contrast. A simple change that could be made would be to change the purple/lilac colors to a dark blue like the background. This would make the elements stand out more.
However, I really like the version without colors, with only strokes (Doodling phase). It's my favorite. I think it suited your style a lot. The strokes are minute and detailed and this makes the white text stand out as negative space. It turned out pretty cool!
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Insegnante PlusWow! The level of detail in the drawings is great! Well done. I like the choice of font and how well the text fits together.
Speaking of the first image, I think it could have more contrast. A simple change that could be made would be to change the purple/lilac colors to a dark blue like the background. This would make the elements stand out more.
However, I really like the version without colors, with only strokes (Doodling phase). It's my favorite. I think it suited your style a lot. The strokes are minute and detailed and this makes the white text stand out as negative space. It turned out pretty cool!
Congratulations!
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Thanks! I'll put your critique to use, really enjoyed your course!
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