Hola! A beautiful piece of writing, especially the moments when you have those specific memories of opening Christmas presents and the surprise rain during the football game. I like how you focus on the smell: the magic of the story is that the book reminds her of the smell and then she becomes that smell, so in a way, the narrator becomes the book. It's a beautiful twist at the end of the story. I hope you enjoyed the course, and thank you for sharing the story with us. Un abrazo desde Madrid :)
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Professeur PlusHola! A beautiful piece of writing, especially the moments when you have those specific memories of opening Christmas presents and the surprise rain during the football game. I like how you focus on the smell: the magic of the story is that the book reminds her of the smell and then she becomes that smell, so in a way, the narrator becomes the book. It's a beautiful twist at the end of the story. I hope you enjoyed the course, and thank you for sharing the story with us. Un abrazo desde Madrid :)
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