Hello Maria,
Congratulations on completing the course and thanks for sharing your final project with the community.
These pictures are really impressive! They have a unique vintage vibe, and the black and white shots, in particular, evoke a feeling as if they’re from another century, which is really captivating. You have an excellent eye for capturing candid moments, and your ability to tell a story through those fleeting instances is clear.
From a technical standpoint, I would suggest paying closer attention to the focus, as it tends to be a bit soft in several images. Sharper focus, especially on the main subjects, would enhance the impact even more.
I also noticed that the strongest images in your project are the ones that embrace simplicity—where only the subjects are in the frame. These photos really stand out. However, in some cases, the background feels a bit cluttered, with houses or cars distracting from the core of the image. For these, I would suggest considering how to frame your shots in a way that maintains the same simplicity and elegance of your best images.
Overall, this project is really well done, and with these tweaks, it could be even stronger! Keep up the great work!
Thanks again for sharing your project.
Best of luck,
Giulia
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Professeur PlusHello Maria,
Congratulations on completing the course and thanks for sharing your final project with the community.
These pictures are really impressive! They have a unique vintage vibe, and the black and white shots, in particular, evoke a feeling as if they’re from another century, which is really captivating. You have an excellent eye for capturing candid moments, and your ability to tell a story through those fleeting instances is clear.
From a technical standpoint, I would suggest paying closer attention to the focus, as it tends to be a bit soft in several images. Sharper focus, especially on the main subjects, would enhance the impact even more.
I also noticed that the strongest images in your project are the ones that embrace simplicity—where only the subjects are in the frame. These photos really stand out. However, in some cases, the background feels a bit cluttered, with houses or cars distracting from the core of the image. For these, I would suggest considering how to frame your shots in a way that maintains the same simplicity and elegance of your best images.
Overall, this project is really well done, and with these tweaks, it could be even stronger! Keep up the great work!
Thanks again for sharing your project.
Best of luck,
Giulia
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